Throughout the grand pattern of things you receive a B+ just for hard work. Where you lost us was in all the specifics. You know, people say, the devil is in the details... And it could not be more accurate here. Having said that, let me inform you exactly what did give good results. The article (parts of it) is definitely extremely persuasive which is probably why I am making the effort in order to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, while I can easily notice the jumps in logic you make, I am not necessarily confident of just how you appear to unite your details which help to make the final result. For the moment I will, no doubt yield to your point but trust in the near future you connect the facts better.