Throughout this grand pattern of things you actually receive an A+ with regard to hard work. Where you lost everybody was on your specifics. As it is said, details make or break the argument.. And that could not be much more correct at this point. Having said that, permit me say to you what exactly did work. The writing is rather powerful and that is possibly why I am taking the effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, whilst I can certainly notice a jumps in logic you come up with, I am not sure of exactly how you appear to connect the ideas which help to make the conclusion. For the moment I shall subscribe to your point but hope in the near future you connect your dots much better.