Throughout this awesome pattern of things you actually secure a B+ with regard to effort and hard work. Exactly where you actually lost everybody was on all the details. You know, as the maxim goes, details make or break the argument.. And it couldn't be much more true here. Having said that, let me tell you what exactly did give good results. The writing is actually incredibly powerful and this is probably why I am making the effort in order to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, while I can notice the jumps in logic you make, I am not necessarily confident of exactly how you seem to connect the points which inturn produce your final result. For right now I will subscribe to your position but trust in the near future you actually connect the dots better.