In this grand pattern of things you actually get a B- with regard to effort and hard work. Where exactly you actually lost me personally was first on your details. As people say, the devil is in the details... And that could not be much more true in this article. Having said that, let me reveal to you what exactly did do the job. Your text is very persuasive and that is most likely why I am taking the effort in order to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, even though I can see the leaps in logic you come up with, I am not sure of exactly how you appear to connect the details that help to make the conclusion. For the moment I shall subscribe to your position but trust in the future you actually link your dots much better.