In this amazing pattern of things you actually secure a B- for effort. Where exactly you actually lost everybody was first on all the particulars. As it is said, the devil is in the details... And that could not be more correct in this article. Having said that, let me say to you exactly what did work. The authoring can be pretty powerful and this is most likely why I am making the effort in order to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, whilst I can certainly notice the leaps in reasoning you come up with, I am definitely not certain of just how you seem to unite the ideas that produce your final result. For the moment I will, no doubt yield to your issue but wish in the future you link the dots better.