In this excellent pattern of things you'll secure a B- for effort. Where exactly you actually misplaced us was first in all the facts. As as the maxim goes, the devil is in the details... And it couldn't be much more true at this point. Having said that, allow me inform you what exactly did give good results. The article (parts of it) is extremely engaging and that is probably the reason why I am taking the effort in order to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, while I can certainly see the jumps in reason you come up with, I am definitely not confident of how you appear to connect the points that produce your conclusion. For right now I will, no doubt subscribe to your issue but wish in the future you link the facts better.