In this excellent scheme of things you secure an A for effort. Where you lost everybody ended up being in all the details. You know, it is said, details make or break the argument.. And that could not be much more correct here. Having said that, let me tell you what did work. Your text is definitely rather powerful and that is most likely why I am taking the effort to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, whilst I can notice a jumps in reason you come up with, I am not really sure of how you seem to unite the ideas which make the actual conclusion. For right now I will, no doubt subscribe to your point but hope in the foreseeable future you actually link your facts better.