In this amazing scheme of things you get a B- just for effort and hard work. Where exactly you actually misplaced me was in your specifics. You know, they say, details make or break the argument.. And it could not be much more accurate here. Having said that, permit me reveal to you what exactly did give good results. The article (parts of it) can be highly engaging and that is probably why I am making an effort to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, despite the fact that I can see a jumps in logic you make, I am not sure of how you seem to connect your points that help to make the conclusion. For the moment I will yield to your point however hope in the near future you connect the dots better.